Ghost hunting video

[scojer]

I'm part of a paranormal group and we recently decided to start making youtube videos. We just posted our first video and all comments or criticism are welcome!

Not from a "ghosts are fake" standpoint, but how can we make the video better and more watchable?

Case #1

So far, the intro is too long, a couple of jarring scenes, and the music is too loud.
That is the criticism so far.

Thanks!